Erutan VS Azzedar - page 2

This is the 2nd out of 3 pages! Make sure to zoom, to read in original size, please leave me some feedback, and tell me what you think!

Page 1: [link]
Page 2: (this page
Page 3: [link]

This is my entry for the second round in this contest [link]
I made the first two pages JUST in time, and the 3th only a liiitle bit late, so I hope it will be okay, since I worked A LOT on this. I actually havent had the time to do anything else during the last two weeks (the time we got to make out entry) wich means, that I have stopped all my other dA projects, and havent read the latest journals etc. But now I'll be back and active again! (once I catch up on my homework lol)
This was my last entry, please tell me if you prefer this or my last style [link] (personally I prefer this one, but it did also take way longer time)
In the contest, we had to make our OC (Erutan) fight anothers OC (Azzedar made by =Azzedar-san ) at the top of the "Lauri Mountains". I used some various fonts for the text, if you want the name on some, just ask
Please, please, give me some feedback, I would apreciate it especially at this deviation, because I putted a lot of effort into it! Also, cross your fingers for me, to move on! (My opponents entry is pretty tough) :crossfingers:
MADE IN: MS Paint for storyboard, text etc, and GIMP 2.0 for drawing (using a crappy tablet this time)
Worktime: All in all: 20-30 hours lost count this page: probably... 15 hours or a bit less.